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Xzzzy wrote: ↑Sat Aug 18, 2018 5:32 am
Great work, man. If I could make one suggestion, though...tell us more about Emma and Rachel? You’re basing them
In your head on somebody, right? How old are they? What color hair? Emma’s in her stocking feet? What color are her nylons? That kind of thing.
Ya I think he was just trying to write a quick story. He has longer ones with more detail. I thought this one was super entertaining. Personally I just love when one woman sees the other shoeplaying and then decides to do it herself. But another masterful job joshjack!!!