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Write here your dreams, your stories, your experiences of footsie or other situations where a foot had been used to seduce

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MM12
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Thank you soooo much! Your like a writing god!!


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I did and that was some of your best work. Really great job. I also have some more setting and character ideas whenever you're up for another story which doesn't have to be anytime soon.
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Yes!! I loved Jennifer Conroy (the teacher). I was so pumped when you made one sister a teacher and one an accountant. I also really love the whole sister idea and the fact that they are both shoeplayers and you go back and forth between stories. Other jobs I think are made for shoeplayers include librarians air hostesses, nurses, and people who work in malls or jewelry stores, but I definitely think bankers and teachers are better. I love it when the women think they aren't allowed to take their shoes off but they still shoeplay. Also, I really loved Greer Tatum from one of your Christmas stories. I don't much care about the setting as long as it's mostly inside. Anyway you did a spectacular job and anytime you want to write another story please share it on this site because I live for stories like these.
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Great story! You're good at setting up multiple storylines/character arcs and making sure they all weave back into one another. I know one of my hardest struggles with writing stories like this is writing the "bridge" material. If I were writing a porno about the guy who comes to fix the cable at the girl's apartment, I'd have to make sure the cable was fixed by the end of the tale! In other words, I'll get hung up in writing that little piece to keep the story coherent between shoeplay moments, and that can be taxing.

I suppose I favored Jessica in this tale, probably because I've been writing stories of a bank teller, I love always-stockinged-inside ladies, and I once worked with a girl who had the same "dress for the job you want" approach.
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When do you think you might be able to write another one?
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joshjack wrote:Maybe I can write a new story in September but again that depends on my available time. I have to earn a living, so unless someone starts paying me for what I write it will always take a back seat. I will post a story I wrote about 12 years ago soon to start a new thread.

Cheers,
Look man I'm in high school. I don't have any money. I don't mind waiting for your stories. My biggest fear is that you leave the forum. I'm not trying to be pushy I just don't wanna see someone with your kind of talent disappear.
paradigm88
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Post by paradigm88 »

It's hard to prioritize a hobby sometimes. I used to write a lot, not just foot fiction but other short stories and the like. My first year of college drained a lot of my creative energies and I put my recreation time into video gaming instead! I keep trying to get back to writing, but it can be hard to find time when your mind isn't drawn in different directions.

For me, I've found that I can usually steal 10-20 minutes before I hop in the shower for my foot fiction; my fiancee is still asleep and no one's going to bother me at that hour! I'd love to find time to work on other stuff too, but by the late evening my energy is often spent (plus there are the distractions of chores, conversation, and the occasional work phone call).

I think we all understand the pressures we're under; if only we could get paid to do this! I'm hopeful to have something to share of my own by the weekend.
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Do you think you can write another one before your annual Christmas special?
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Sounds great. Can't wait to hear it
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Post by MM12 »

Wow just reread this. This was some of your best work Jack!! Can't wait until you make another one!
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